So I have emailed my draft to one person and they have not responded to my email. I'm waiting on that but you know what I have found that helps me after I'm done writing my paper. If I read my paper out loud it is easier to put the correct punctuation where it goes. I have found that researching my topic under different things like illegal drugs during pregnancy, instead of the effects of illegal drugs during pregnancy gives me more topics. So I'm looking forward to getting feedback about my draft.